Tuesday, 8 March 2016

'Very Strange Things' - Rewrites begin Anew (8/3/2016)

So, taking cues from recent feedback, as well as my meeting with Alan Robinson, I decided to begin the fourth (now probably fifteenth or sixteenth overall) rewrite of Time of Miracles, the show's pilot. The emphasis will be mainly on reduction, cutting out unneeded 'fat and bloat' from the script, such as overlong or overcomplicated action, any rambling dialogue, excessive detail in the action lines that doesn't help the animator or the storytelling and anything that may hinder making a good first impression.

This should take no more than a few days, maybe three or four, alongside some recent punch ups I've done to the series bible.

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