Another slice of professional feedback, this time from an Ireland-based company, and with an amusing little detail that does elicit a little embarrassment mixed with humour. Ah well, live and learn.
Sorry for the delay in
replying to you about your script for ‘Very Strange Things’ which I have now
read. It isn’t the sort of project we would make here at Calon as we tend to
mainly produce series for pre-school audiences (Hana’s Helpline, Igam Ogam etc)
but I thought your script was very
well-written and well-paced with some nice characterization and concise, crisp
I don’t want to be a
pedant but there’s a small typo where Jim becomes Tim around page 5. It’s
refreshing to see such a professional script and you obviously have a talent
for writing action. Your villain is also very distinctive and that is always a
Good luck with your
project in the future, etc. etc.
Definitely on a roll now with
these two responses, and some potential offers on the horizon. 2016 is already
proving to be an interesting year...